BSA703-Class Pitch Feedback and Notes

 Edwin-Flatting with Cryptids 👍

• Unique idea
• Reminds me of "What We do in the Shadow"
• Has a lot of potential for different skit ideas
• Character designs can encompass the different styles our group has

Corrie-Lava!

• Not sure about doing a game (need coders.)
• Cute story idea
• Market research was a good idea
• Personally not interested in doing a game because we have so many animators and we would possibly have to source outside our group for this project.

Melissa and Zara-Ugly Fish Dinner 👌

• Lots of mixed media which is cool
• Had everyone's backgrounds in mind
• Possibility for many different roles and jobs
• Interesting story, very relatable
• Very different characters, means lots to play with
• Good opportunity for a comedic animation.
• Plays around with a great use of audio

Thomas-Homage to Mecha 👍

• Different perspective to a Mecha anime/story
• Cool environment, potential for a lot of work to be put in
• Character idea reminds me of Deca-Dence (Teacher and Student)
• School scene for culture is interesting idea to set the world up
• Card based character arc, foreshadowing (kid gets Janitor card and becomes Janitor later on in life)
• Job positivity

Bean-Breakout

• Dark Comedy could be interesting although personally I would like to do something brighter
• Game character fights player
• Live-action merges into an animation
• Whimsical styles/influences, potential for interesting lighting
• Character designs could be interesting
• Fantasy styled backgrounds
• Simplicity in designs
• Focuses on inclusivity and accessibility (Accessibility is something we should focus on regardless of the project)

Vinnie-Untitled

• A Trans-Media story
• Fantasy Adventure with target audience is aimed and young teens but can be enjoyed by older teens
• Continental titans
• Young explorer either awakens or slays titans, depends on rating we want for it
• OR
• Titan get accidently awakened and wakes up another titan, titan battle ensues
• Interesting titan designs, based on their continents environment
• Consequences for titans deaths 
• Shadow of Colossus inspired

Emma and Sarah-Choose your own Mystery

• Waking up in a trunk with Amnesia
• 3 routes (Good, Neutral and Bad)
• Dark comedy/Mystery/Horror
• Youtube or own website as a platform
• Motion comic, interactive video or video game
• Cool environment ideas
• Different art styles for each route
• Puzzels! Get them all and secret ending is unlocked
• An Interesting concept, could be a lot of work in order to create it. But it opens up for a lot of research on the backgrounds of creating this. 
• Might have to compromise on style for time

Rach-Elevator Pitch

• Animated short film
• Whodunnit murder mystery
• Choose your own adventure
• Reminds me of Joey Graceffas Youtube Series Escape the Night.
• Use social media to push it out (Think Blair witch)
• Making it into real world universe
• Useful for exhibition/premiere (Make a real world Whodunnit for Premiere)
• There is a lot of work in creating this. Possibly to much?

Becca-Earth Tourist

• Video Game
• Educational Game
• Personally not interested in creating anything educational
• Hub world, minigames
• Set in New Zealand
• Themed wallpaper as a reward for completing tasks
• Certificate for completing game (printable)
• Large age range, From 5-15. 
• 3D based

Max-Bug 👌

• Story about perception
• Bug man character
• Accidently saves people during his anger tantrum
• Town begins to like him
• Shakespearian tragedy
• Slapstick comedy
• Romance between pretty woman and bug man
• Open to discussion for medium