BSA703-Latest Animatic Edit

We need a transition between Bathroom and Restaurant. I find the cut strange and jarring, could be smoother. maybe re add him arriving at restaurant?

I like the ending, its the best version of the ending so far. 

I think we need some background water during his anxious times (background story telling) 

Very quick, I would prefer slower story telling, slow burn if you will. Middle goes very quickly. 

The start is better, I like the mirror shots. 

Pacing of start and ending is good, although the start may need to be a bit slower.