BSA703-One on Ones with Patrick about our pitch

 Feedback from Patrick

External Objective (has to be tangible)

Is to get back the robot that the mafia stole from her inventor father.

Internal Objective (something to do with a relationship) 

Her relationship to her only living parent, her father.

Who/What is she doing this for?

She is doing this for her father, whos life was ruined when the Mafia stole his robot. her father was supposed to make the robot for the Government, but the Mafia found out about and took the prototype for the robot as it was made to stop the Mafias plans from commencing . 

Why is this important

The robot has the ability to take down Mafia by using the city's interface and data to seek them out. It would be able to alert the police to crimes before they happen. 

The Mafia didn't want this to happen as they had a hand in what the Government did, it was only until recently when a new government stepped in, that the Mafias corruption lessened.

The robot was supposed to become a fleet of surveillance bots.   

What does she learn by the end? (Character arc)

Learns how to dupe the Mafia

Learns the value of a life

Learns that she can help the Government by being thief

Potential character names

Astrid

Clarissa

Minerva

Ryah

Rhys/Reese

Briar

Eris